Black☆Star Bio WIP

http://jediknight3.filefront.com/file/Vincent_Valentine;75785 <---skin (comes with a gun that is a saber but you dont need to use it lol)


Name:Black☆Star
Age:15
Gender:Male
Race:Human
Planet of Birth:Tatooine
Personality:Dark,mysterious,Friendly(if you get to know him)
Languages:Galactic basic

Work Related Information

Equipment:Sword,Blaster,pistols,Repeater
Training:Master is unknown to all but himself
Faction:Rebels
Rank(highlighted):None
Job/Profession:Mercinary
Baically does for a living:Anything that i get paid for.
Armor:Mercinary armor and a Black robe to hide it.
FS?:Yes(but not enough to be able to use the force to do anything but sense other people.)
Transport:Varies

Background:(need to RP him before i can start a background cause i cant think of anything)



Diary:(none yet)

Well nice. But you still have to say a little detail... Like a level one biography.

Well another things thats an issue with me...There aint no anime in SW...plese change the pic to something star wars realistic(I aint saying SW only but atleast something like that, like my Tali pic from ME2)

Okay. Another thing. You can't really have this:''Mandolorian battle armor hidden under civilian clothing and black robe'. Off it.A Mandalorian armor is hard to find and no way you can have an armor under some clothes. It is just too heavy.

k and btw i was just about to change the Pic and its a WIP btw says so in teh title

Lol Vincent.

Alright picture is better, now for the bio

Yeah maybe a lil more info

Stop spamming me saying lil more info! ;-; i need to rp him some and its WIP Till further notice i cant think of anything atm >.> im only good at jedi Bio's and i cant have a jedi so yeah .-.

Uhm. You don't really need to do that. You can say where he was born, how he got his armor/weapons without RP...

Pretty much...

I know that >.> im trying to think of what to write .-. like i said im only good with jedi Bio's >.>

Well, you should stop for a moment, and consider what you want your character to be. For example, you want your character to be dark and mysterious- well, why don't you make a story to give reasons why he is? Did he suffer a bad up bringing? Did he have difficulties in certain areas of his life that caused him to be so? Did he have dark encounters? Does he have plenty of negatives in his life? Did he suffer a huge, life changing event, like the death of someone he cared for closely, someone he loved? Did he suffer a physical injury, or does he suffer mental illnesses? Just think about different pointers on what could help you.

Ok lord (and sorry if this pisses anyone else off) but What part of I CANT THINK OF WHAT TO WRITE do you not understand?

If you weren't so ignorant, you would taken in what I just said and applied them to your character and it would assist you in creating a character, in MAKING AN IDEA. But no, you just blandly ignore it because it's more than one line long and say what you said.

Seriously Lord helped me to understand what a biography for a charecter is in the first palce(the mandalorian char on Cont) You should seriously THINK of something to write, like Lord said...seriously if you leave things blank there is no reason for this bio...

.....Can you people just leave me alone about this bio atm im going through alot in rl so i dont have much time to even think about a bio but in what spare time i have i do think about it.So could you guys just please leave this alone. Oh and lord....Sorry about being so rude i just looked back at my comment and saw how rude i was being.i was really tired and in a very bad mood when i wrote that and im sorry.

It doesn't take much to write a paragraph.

Right then...Ill give you some more time.

Well thats a way to move it up say you got problems in real life. You dont know where i went trough anyhow il give this a few more days and when its not done il just denie it. I'm sorry Mickey

Please.. Don't do the whole "You don't know what I've been through" cliche. Sure, you got fucked by a dog, raped by a cat and your mother ate your brother for dinner instead of baked beans.