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mickey Padawan/Apprentice
Posts : 36 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-01 Age : 28 Location : My livin room
| Subject: Black☆Star Bio WIP Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:50 am | |
| http://jediknight3.filefront.com/file/Vincent_Valentine;75785 <---skin (comes with a gun that is a saber but you dont need to use it lol) Name:Black☆Star Age:15 Gender:Male Race:Human Planet of Birth:Tatooine Personality:Dark,mysterious,Friendly(if you get to know him) Languages:Galactic basic Work Related Information Equipment:Sword,Blaster,pistols,Repeater Training:Master is unknown to all but himself Faction:Rebels Rank(highlighted):None Job/Profession:Mercinary Baically does for a living:Anything that i get paid for. Armor:Mercinary armor and a Black robe to hide it. FS?:Yes(but not enough to be able to use the force to do anything but sense other people.) Transport:Varies Background:(need to RP him before i can start a background cause i cant think of anything) Diary:(none yet)
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Jang. Master Admin
Posts : 226 Reputation : 7 Join date : 2010-03-09 Age : 39
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:45 am | |
| Well nice. But you still have to say a little detail... Like a level one biography. | |
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Norina Admin
Posts : 209 Reputation : 10 Join date : 2010-03-10 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:51 am | |
| Well another things thats an issue with me...There aint no anime in SW...plese change the pic to something star wars realistic(I aint saying SW only but atleast something like that, like my Tali pic from ME2) | |
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Jang. Master Admin
Posts : 226 Reputation : 7 Join date : 2010-03-09 Age : 39
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:55 am | |
| Okay. Another thing. You can't really have this:''Mandolorian battle armor hidden under civilian clothing and black robe'. Off it.A Mandalorian armor is hard to find and no way you can have an armor under some clothes. It is just too heavy. | |
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mickey Padawan/Apprentice
Posts : 36 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-01 Age : 28 Location : My livin room
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:52 pm | |
| k and btw i was just about to change the Pic and its a WIP btw says so in teh title | |
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Sai-Nala Padawan/Apprentice
Posts : 53 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2010-04-02
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:34 am | |
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Norina Admin
Posts : 209 Reputation : 10 Join date : 2010-03-10 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:50 pm | |
| Alright picture is better, now for the bio | |
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Ivu Master Admin
Posts : 371 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-03-08 Age : 35 Location : The netherlands
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:16 pm | |
| Yeah maybe a lil more info | |
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mickey Padawan/Apprentice
Posts : 36 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-01 Age : 28 Location : My livin room
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:35 pm | |
| Stop spamming me saying lil more info! ;-; i need to rp him some and its WIP Till further notice i cant think of anything atm >.> im only good at jedi Bio's and i cant have a jedi so yeah .-. | |
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Jang. Master Admin
Posts : 226 Reputation : 7 Join date : 2010-03-09 Age : 39
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:27 pm | |
| Uhm. You don't really need to do that. You can say where he was born, how he got his armor/weapons without RP... | |
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Norina Admin
Posts : 209 Reputation : 10 Join date : 2010-03-10 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Thu Apr 29, 2010 3:43 am | |
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mickey Padawan/Apprentice
Posts : 36 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-01 Age : 28 Location : My livin room
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Thu Apr 29, 2010 8:47 am | |
| I know that >.> im trying to think of what to write .-. like i said im only good with jedi Bio's >.> | |
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Lord Admin
Posts : 106 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-10
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed May 05, 2010 12:26 am | |
| Well, you should stop for a moment, and consider what you want your character to be. For example, you want your character to be dark and mysterious- well, why don't you make a story to give reasons why he is? Did he suffer a bad up bringing? Did he have difficulties in certain areas of his life that caused him to be so? Did he have dark encounters? Does he have plenty of negatives in his life? Did he suffer a huge, life changing event, like the death of someone he cared for closely, someone he loved? Did he suffer a physical injury, or does he suffer mental illnesses? Just think about different pointers on what could help you. | |
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mickey Padawan/Apprentice
Posts : 36 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-01 Age : 28 Location : My livin room
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed May 05, 2010 4:49 am | |
| Ok lord (and sorry if this pisses anyone else off) but What part of I CANT THINK OF WHAT TO WRITE do you not understand? | |
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Lord Admin
Posts : 106 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-10
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed May 05, 2010 6:18 am | |
| If you weren't so ignorant, you would taken in what I just said and applied them to your character and it would assist you in creating a character, in MAKING AN IDEA. But no, you just blandly ignore it because it's more than one line long and say what you said. | |
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Norina Admin
Posts : 209 Reputation : 10 Join date : 2010-03-10 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Wed May 05, 2010 9:44 am | |
| Seriously Lord helped me to understand what a biography for a charecter is in the first palce(the mandalorian char on Cont) You should seriously THINK of something to write, like Lord said...seriously if you leave things blank there is no reason for this bio... | |
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mickey Padawan/Apprentice
Posts : 36 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-01 Age : 28 Location : My livin room
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Thu May 06, 2010 3:00 am | |
| .....Can you people just leave me alone about this bio atm im going through alot in rl so i dont have much time to even think about a bio but in what spare time i have i do think about it.So could you guys just please leave this alone. Oh and lord....Sorry about being so rude i just looked back at my comment and saw how rude i was being.i was really tired and in a very bad mood when i wrote that and im sorry.
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Sai-Nala Padawan/Apprentice
Posts : 53 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2010-04-02
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Thu May 06, 2010 3:03 am | |
| It doesn't take much to write a paragraph. | |
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Norina Admin
Posts : 209 Reputation : 10 Join date : 2010-03-10 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Thu May 06, 2010 3:28 am | |
| Right then...Ill give you some more time. | |
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Ivu Master Admin
Posts : 371 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-03-08 Age : 35 Location : The netherlands
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Thu May 06, 2010 5:59 am | |
| Well thats a way to move it up say you got problems in real life. You dont know where i went trough anyhow il give this a few more days and when its not done il just denie it. I'm sorry Mickey | |
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Lord Admin
Posts : 106 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-04-10
| Subject: Re: Black☆Star Bio WIP Thu May 06, 2010 6:57 am | |
| Please.. Don't do the whole "You don't know what I've been through" cliche. Sure, you got fucked by a dog, raped by a cat and your mother ate your brother for dinner instead of baked beans. | |
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Ivu Master Admin
Posts : 371 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-03-08 Age : 35 Location : The netherlands
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